Pan is the closest moon to Saturn's surface. Atlas is the second closest moon to Saturn's surface it was discovered in 1980. Prometheus the inner shepherd satellite of the F ring. Pandora outer shepherd moon on the F ring. Epimethius fifth moon from the surface of Saturn. Janus is the root for January. Mimas is round because it's gravity can pull the material into a globe. Enceladus eighth moon orbiting Saturn. Tethys is a giant ice cube in the sky. Telesto discovered in 1980. Calypso is one of the smallest moons in the solar system. Dione is the densest, or heaviest of Saturn's moons. Helene thirteenth moon from the surface of Saturn. Rhea is the second largest or Saturn's moons. Titan Largest moon orbiting Saturn second largest moon in the solar system. Hyperion sixteenth moon orbiting Saturn. Iapetus is made up of mostly water ice. Phebe is four times more distant then Iapetusits.
In mythology Uranus was the king of the skies and the husband of Earth. He also was the king of the gods until he was over thrown by his son Saturn. Uranus is also a gas giant like Saturn and Jupiter. The planets nick name is "Ice Giant". Uranus is almost identical to Neptune.
Many of Virginia's leaders believed settling the frontier beyond the Piedmont was important to to the colony's future. The colony's leaders encouraged settlers to travel farther west into parts of Virginia that had not been explored. Many settlers began to grow tobacco. One problem with growing tobacco was that it used up nutrients in the soil. To keep making money planters needed a lot of land.
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ReplyDeleteA couple of sentences in your first paragraph don't quite make sense. Make sure to read them before continuing on. When you read a sentence, make sure it sound right. Also, Phoebe is spelled wrong. You also spelled Iapetus wrong.
In your second paragraph, overthrown is one one not two.
In your last paragraph, you wrote Im instead of I'm. Also you need to capitalize the word I. Wish me luck is a sentence all by itself.
Not a bad post. Work on the things that I mentioned. Also, you need to introduce what you are talking about. First paragraph you could have wrote something like. Let me tell you a little bit about Saturn's moons. Otherwise very good :)
Your word count was 329 words.
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ReplyDelete2pt sentence makes sense
1pt introducing topic