Wednesday, October 19, 2011

facts and a small story

Saturn is the 6th planet from the sun. Saturn was the roman god of agriculture. Greeks called him Chronus.
He was the son of Uranus and the father of  Jupiter. Saturn is a gas giant it is mostly made up of hydrogen and helium.

Pocahontas was about 10 years old when the first English settlers arrived at Jamestown. Pocahontas was the daughter of Powhatan. In order to get more food Captain John Smith began a trading relationship with the native peoples who lived near Jamestown. The settlers traded tools and pots for much-needed food. The settlers also traded copper which the native peoples used to make jewelry.

There are 5 steps to writing a survey question. Number one decide on a question for your survey. Number two plan your survey and make predictions. Number three write what you want to find out from the groups. Number four write what you predict you will find when you compare. Number five write how you will record and keep track of your data.

Katti and John were going to buy a new kitten. They were going to buy the kitten at Jefferson's finest pet's. On there way to the pet store Katti forgot her money.

They quickly ran back to Katti's house and grabbed her wallet. Her wallet was blue, pink and orange.Katti gasped at a kitten in the catalog I want that one she shouted to John. The kitten was black with white around its neck and it had a cute pink little nose. They turned a corner and there was Jefferson's finest pet's.


They opened the door hello a man shouted. They turned
 around it was Jefferson. He was wearing a bright orange shirt with paw prints on it. Katti showed him the kitten in the catalog kitten she wanted. I know exactly were that kitten is "follow me" he said. There it was the kitten right in front of there faces "how much is it" asked Katti? Jefferson said well usually $15  but for you $5 "deal" said Katti. They took the kitten and went home.

3 comments:

  1. Andrea,

    I'm very impressed with your blog today. You gave more information than you had previously.

    Just a couple of notes:

    Survey question paragraph: after saying the number of the step, you should have put a , to show the actual step. Example: First, this. Second, that. Finally, end.

    Otherwise, you were to underline the pronouns from the story you wrote the other day. You underlined some but not all. You will have to look more carefully at this next time.

    Your word count was 363. Nice Job

    love mommy

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  2. Did you get to learn about what Saturn's rings are made of? What is your favorite planet? Astronomy is my favorite subject!

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  3. Score: 23/25
    1pt commas
    1pt directions

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