Katti and John were going to buy a new kitten. They were going to buy the kitten at Jefferson's finest pet's. On there way to the pet store Katti forgot her money.
They quickly ran back to Katti's house and grabbed her wallet. Her wallet was blue, pink and orange.Kattie gasped at a kitten in the catalog I want that one she shouted to John. The kitten was black with white around its neck and it had a cute pink little nose. They turned a corner and there was Jefferson's finest pet's.
They opened the door hello a man shouted. They turned around it was Jefferson. He was wearing a bright orange shirt with paw prints on it. Katti showed him the kitten in the kitten she wanted. I know exactly were that kitten is "follow me" he said. There it was the kitten right in front of there faces "how much is it" asked Katti? Jefferson said well usually $15 but for you $5 "deal" said Katti. They took the kitten and went home.
THE END
Andi,
ReplyDeleteIt is a very cute story. We need to work on capitalization of proper nouns, how to use "", and sentence structure. The story was understandable and interesting. It just needs a little work :) Your word count was 174.
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mommy
Very nice story. Don't forget to use there and their properly also. But great work!
ReplyDeleteScore for this blog 22/25
ReplyDelete1pt capitalization
1pt sentence structure
1pt usage of their/there