Jupiter has more than 50 moons. Galileo discovered 4 Ganymede, Io, Europa, and Callisto. Jupiter's closest moon to its surface is Metis. In total Jupiter has 62 moons. Metis was also Jupiter's first wife in mythology.
John Smith was a leader of a colony in Jamestown. He was a author, explorer, and a English soldier. He was baptized on January 6 1680. He colonized a new world. Smith's books and maps may have been important as his deeds.
Pronouns are non specific nouns. A example is I did but he didn't do it. There are different types of pronouns. Like he and someone are different pronouns.
Soccer was created in China but it wasn't called soccer. It was just kicking a ball into nets. The sport was considered a exercise for the soldiers. In the early years kicking, punching, and biting were allowed.
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ReplyDeleteYou did not mention any of the outer planets and didn't give much information. You could have told me more about the moons.
In your John Smith paragraph, you should have put a , between January 6, and 1680.
You needed to tell me the types of pronouns not just examples.
In your paragraph about soccer, you only gave a little information. You could have given so much more.
Your word count it 138 words.
Please try to write a little more next time.
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