I went to West Virginia on October 7th. I came back October 11th. On my last day on vacation i ate at Gino's. I also saw two of my grandparents. I saw my grandma's new house it was huge.
I also finished a game called unfortunate accidents. Its were you kill people but you make it look like a accident. And I had hot dog chili.
On the day we left we ate dinner at Dairy Queen. I had a white ice cream cone. then we drove to our house. After we got to the house I went to bed.
Andrea,
ReplyDeleteYour post is short but there is a lot of information. I believe it could have been longer. and you need to remember to capitalize the beginning of a sentence.
Your word count was 100 words
Love mommy
And you got to see Uncle Keith and Aunt Lily, which had to be the best part!
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ReplyDelete2pt capitalization, not fixing
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1pt use of it's/its