Monday, November 14, 2011

Asteroids, Football, and My Favorite Instrument

Asteroids come in many shapes and sizes. Asteroids don't have the energy to pull themselves into a ball. There are 26 asteroids that we know of here are some facts about some of them. The first asteroid we are going to talk about is Quaoar is the largest non-planet object in the solar system. Ceresis is about 600 miles wide. 2001 KX76 is the new asteroid king! The last asteroid we will be talking about is Ida. Ida is a enteresting little asteroid  it also has a little moon named Dactyl.

My favorite instrument has always been the piano. Piano's can be used for almost any type of music except rap. A piano is usually played in a orchestra but it can be played in other music to. The piano is a musical instrument played by means of a keyboard. It is one of the most popular instruments in the world. Widely used in classical and jazz music for solo performances, ensemble use, chamber music and accompaniment, the piano is also very popular as an aid to composing and rehearsal. Although not portable and often expensive, the piano's versatility and ubiquity have made it one of the world's most familiar musical instruments. Stewart Pollens invented the piano. Now a piano is used for playing beautiful music.

Here are the 4 most important parts in foot ball! The quarterback is probably the most important role in football. The quarter back is a position in American and Canadian football. The next position is the running back. A running back is one of the most important roles in football. The next role is punter. A punter recives the snapped ball. The last role is the kicker. The kicker kicks the football into the goal.

1 comment:

  1. Andrea,

    In your first paragraph, you have a run on sentence about Quaoar. It should be 2 sentences. Your last sentence is also a run on. You misspelled interesting.

    I loved your paragraph about the piano. Very interesting and informative.

    In the first sentence, football is one word not two. Also, quarterback is one word. What does the quarterback and running back do? You misspelled receives. Otherwise, I liked your blog today. You are getting there.

    Don't forget to share it on facebook.

    Your word count is 287 words.

    Your score is 22/25
    1pt run-on sentence
    1pt compound words
    1pt spelling

    love mommy

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