If I had to pick someone to have lunch with out of people in the old days I would pick Thomas Jefferson. I am assigned to ask him 5 questions. If he was alive the first question I would ask him is how long did it take you to right The Declaration of Independence? The second on is did you vote for George Washington as president? The third one is what did you think about Britain making taxes for us? The fourth one is if you were in England would you agree with Britain about the taxing us? The last question is if you were also running for president do you think you would win?
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Here is a picture of Thomas Jefferson!
Andrea,
ReplyDeleteYou said that it took a million years, it was actually 800 million years. You have a run on sentence in your first paragraph.
You used the word "right", you should have used write. You write very interesting questions for Thomas Jefferson.
Great sentences.
You need to do a little more work but this was a good post. :)
your word count is 271 words.
Your grade: 23/25
1pt facts
1pt run on sentence.
love mommy :)